Really enjoyed it after the guitar part. at 1:12 I really like the beat and instrumentals. Good variation throughout, it never gets stale. Keep composing!
Really enjoyed it after the guitar part. at 1:12 I really like the beat and instrumentals. Good variation throughout, it never gets stale. Keep composing!
Didn't expect a comment so fast! Appreciate the compliment, thank you very much!
I like this one. nice ambience. the addition of the bass at 0:50 gives it a nice warm feel, like being huddled around a fire in a cave underneath a waterfall. I could see this as a longer piece, especially the way it ends.
had a slightly longer version that got cut. you have a good ear
I would work on easing those transitions, as they are abrupt between sections. Overall, the beat is good and the melody is ok. Some more melodics/instruments/variations could elevate this piece.
gets good towards the middle, I like the part at 1:04 the best. when the drums come in towards the end it elevates the piece as well. Overall not bad, keep at it. It would be nice to see this as a longer track
I agree - but after all, this was just an experimental piece
I like the chill, feel good vibes. Could have used a bit more variation, maybe a melody change, but overall nice feel to it
Many thanks for listening! I was thinking the same thing about the variation in the melody, but nothing came to my mind at the time tbh, I just need more practice and creativity. Thanks again for the support :)
I really like the piano intro. I like the tone of this track. The change up at 1:04 is really good, adds depth to the piece. The beat, while simple feels nice and drives the track well. Good work!
This could be the beginning of something. It has nice ambience, but as a standalone I'd say it's more of a loop than a song.
i was going to put it as a loop and youare right. its one of the interludes on an album tho so i couldnt pick!!
I like the chill vibe, at about 36 seconds there is a bit of dissonance, but I guess it fits the piece well as it is a short section. At 1:30 the dissonance comes back, was this dissonance intentional? Overall this track has potential and I like the way it ends.
Really grabbed me from the start. Then I heard the guitar and wow! Kinda has a megaman meets dreamworld feel to it. I like what you're doing here and would like to hear more.
Cheers,
-G
Could use a bit more variation in the main theme. I liked the quiet breakdowns. Keep at it!
Honestly what I did was an improv on piano and decided to attempt to translate it and it didnt work as planned
Music Composer Electronically since 2004, Glenn M (cyan11) has drawn from several creative influences including Rock, Classical, and Electronica to create music that is pensive and contemplative in nature.
Age 46, Male
Education
Queens College CUNY, Hofstra U
Queens, NY
Joined on 8/3/11